I almost didn't believe it when I saw that this story had been updated, but I was thrilled that it was. Another excellent chapter. The story os flowing well. It doesn't seemed rushed or have the feeling of being dragged on. It is perfection. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I am so so glad you updated this story. I've been waiting for an update, seeing as I love how you write this version of Kagome and Sesshoumaru. ^__^ So yeah. Great chapter! Keep writing!
I AM doing the Happy dance!!!!!!!!! This is one of my
favorites. Thank you so much for updating your story.
Awww sickness....will Sess see her through? Can't wait for the next chapter!
This chapter was worth the wait... I love the sentimentality portrayed with both Sessh and Kagome... And I especially like the whole 'Mother Hen' syndrome that Kagome exhibited... it was quite endearing. You did a wonderful job of realisticly protraying a overstressed single mom with a sick child. MWAH!
shlane (Chapter 20) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
Hi!!!, i won't say anything about the time spent waiting for an update, sadly i was kind of trying to let go, BUT NOW YOU'RE BACK!!!, okay, well, i like this chapter, it kind of sets off a new mood between the characters, now that someone is waiting for the kill, and even though he hasn't made a bold move, she's falling, slowly but she is, i really like the portrayal of the family vibe from rin, it was so cute!!!
Maddie (Chapter 20) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
Haaa I would die of embarassment if any boy came into my room if I was undressed I don't care if I was under the covers!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLZ PLZ PLZ
Wow, this story is seriously awesome. So, so well-written. I'm totally blown away. I especially loved the part where Rin put make-up on Sess, and the line in this chapter where Sess tells Rin "don't say such foolish things." You are just too good at this. Once in a while, a fanfic is like a really great present, given to me by a total stranger. (Credit card commercial: Hours of total enjoyment, priceless.)
Wooooooot! More please!
Me gusta.
Alexandra (Chapter 19) - Thu 01 Jan 2009
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Dancing with Scissors is a wonderful piece of writing. I started reading and could not stop until I had finished all the currently posted chapters. Addictive! Your writing is filled with wit and humor. I like that your version of Kagome is so uninhibited and adore Sesshomaru’s burgeoning love for Rin. You are doing a truly amazing job. Thank you for this wonderful story. Please, keep writing!
Alexandra (Chapter 19) - Thu 01 Jan 2009
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Dancing with Scissors is a wonderful piece of writing. I started reading and could not stop until I had finished all the currently posted chapters. Addictive! Your writing is filled with wit and humor. I like that your version of Kagome is so uninhibited and adore Sesshomaru’s burgeoning love for Rin. You are doing a truly amazing job. Thank you for this wonderful story. Please, keep writing!
I just love this story and look forward to reading updates as soon as I see one. Chapter 19 was sweet and funny. I wonder if Sess will ever find out about the advice column he loves to read is actually written by Kags,which I think will be hilarious.
Update soon. Nicely written.
*hugs and smiles*
HAHA YAY! Just What This Story Needed! Sesshomaru Catching Kagome In the Bath! YES! (Laugh) Please Update As Soon As You Can) I LOVE THIS! And I Loved His Little Fantasy There Too....
Noacat (Chapter 1) - Sat 13 Dec 2008
Heehee. Who doesn't love a good shower peeping scene?! This was great. The sexual tension is just out of this world, not to mention the excellent story surrounding it. Nothing I love better than a well written story with equally well written, tingly playing-hard-to-get smut. (If that makes ANY sense.)
Lilium (Chapter 19) - Sat 13 Dec 2008
Great story. Please continue and update soon!!! I love this. You're writing captivates me and makes me want to read more!! I love you (not in that way O.o), because you draw us readers in...you're like a pro!!! Please, please keep writing!!! or I'll cry T^T. ~Lilium
Oh gracious. That was absolutely briliant!!! I hope you don't make us wait too long for the next chapter, 'cause I REALLY want to know what's going to happen next. I couldn't help laughing during the last scene. How hilarious. I loved it. And I love how you write Mr. & Mrs. Taisho. They're really great. Everything seems to be coming together just brilliantly. ^_^ I love this fic!
Oh goodness, I didn't expect that! Those two are such trouble...
kedala (Chapter 19) - Thu 11 Dec 2008
I just finished watching 'Let the Right One In,' so when I read the part where Rin answered the door for her grandparents and asked "Are you vampires or something," I was immediately drawn to this chapter. lolol
I must say you do very well with characterizing children. Especially in the previous chapter with Rin and her temper tantrum. And although I know this story revolves specifically around the evolving relationship of Sess and Kag, I admit that I do enjoy reading about the spunkiness of the little girl.
Awww! Kagome got all flustered and called him a pervert! Kind of hypocritical if you ask me! I also loved that she misspoke about the column. Haha! This chapter was really exciting, what with the open acceptance of attraction on at least Sesshoumaru's part. I'm really glad you didn't draw out the two weeks that Sesshoumaru was gone inside the chapter (or chapters, even). As soon as you put in that he'd be away, my heart cringed for a moment thinking about all the bits I'd have to read without him. The chemistry between Kagome and Sesshoumaru is really REALLY making this story. I can't wait for more.
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