Thank you for updating!!!! I've been waiting a long time for the next chapter!!! Please another update soon? = )
You captured the anxiety of an inexperienced caretaker confronted with a sick child very well! When everything is going fine, you think you have it all under control. It is when they look and feel so bad, while you are there helpless, doing the little things you can do, that you realize the control is just an illusion.
As usual, the dialogue is perfect and you keep all the players in character, while allowing them to grow into each other at a natural pace. You are able to keep the story interesting even when describing the day-to-day happenings and things move along in a nice flow.
I like the ending! She has no health insurance, she is in need of a Dr., and she is naked under the covers in front of an extremely sexy man she likes... not looking or feeling her best. It is just plain cruel for you to do THAT to her, LOL!
Hah! I knew she'd be sick. With the way strep and the flu travel around our office between mothers with children and vice versa, there's little chance you also WON'T get sick by proxy.
I'm glad she apologized and they went back to their normal pandering back and forth. I feel as if their excessive working is building up to something. Hrm.. Great chapter! I miss your writing.
Please, more. I love this so much.
I'm so excited for the update! I'm posting this before I even read the chapter because I'm SOOO excited! Yay!
Ladydot (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
This story is brilliant! I love it so much. I really can't wait to see how Sesh takes care of poor Kagome! Its going to be so funny and adorable i just know it! Till next time
Ladydot (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
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Lumiere (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
very funny that she could actualy tink of "that" when so sick......so i was actualy thinking if and when he finds that she is his favorite author....???
i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
| Weeeee! You are back! *happy dance* thanks for another great chapter:)
slycats (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
| really great new chapter! So happy and grateful for the update. Well, now Sesshomaru can play doctor...hee,hee. The part of the story that has Sesshomatu comparing Rin's personality to Inuyashas and getting a better feel for the 2 of them as brothers was so sweet. Can't wait to see more of Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship together.
Anggie (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
| With each new chapter I am just amazed. I can't find a hole in your characters. They are so well rounded its chapter 20 and I'm still amazed. I can't wait for more updates.
Nobody (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
YAY! Now i want more but i will wait....as long as i have too.
*Sits and waits
Sumi (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
a good way to start the weekend....you updated!!! this is a NICE breather from studying. now i'll be trying to patiently wait for the next one. gonna try....grr.. CANT WAIT!! lol
tessahime (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
| Finally! I am so indescribably happy you updated ^-^! I was hit by a car about a month ago, and was somewhat bedridden for about two weeks (while on some very good drugs I might add) and your story was my poison of choice to go back and reread. Now that I'm at school, I anxiously await a new update from you basically every night. This story it completely addictive, and I blame you for the drop in my grades ;)
Ashes (Chapter 20) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
You updated!!!! I'm so happy! Absolutely amazing chapter, you captured what it feels like to be thrust into the role of 'mother' extreemly well. Beautiful work as allways. Also, I really like the little situation you threw in at the end. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update. (^_^)
| yes! an update! finally! and a very good update too. =D hoping to see more! kagome is so gonna get reprimanded by Sesshoumaru. lol
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