Oh THANK YOU. I spent a whole 30 minutes in total bliss, forgetting all the woes of the world. It might have been a bugger of a chapter to write, but it sure READ beautifully... and poignantly... and... perfectly. As I am all-too-fond of saying lately, YOU ROCK!! :-) ~~me~~
| Man...you sure do know how to make me emotional reading a story. I truly loved this chapter. You captured the emotions from just a video and made me feel them. Great Job!
Wow, u can really feel the atraction between them. They're slowly coming together and I'm pretty sure that everyone is looking forward to that. Poor Kagome got strep throat from Rin huh? It sucks to have it. Its a good thing that she got Rin and Sesshoumaru. Its just so heart warming. I look forward to your next chapter.
Ashes (Chapter 21) - Sun 08 Mar 2009
Aww, your story makes me so happy. I'm so happy you updated, it's a great energizer to keepme going through my busy week.
| awwwwwwww poor kagome i know she feels like crap....hope she gets better in a couple of chapters (or if not sooner)...please continue soon
| OMG. You've got me hooked onto this story! It's like my favorite fanfic now lol I can't wait to see what happens next please continue
Yay!!! Yay for Kags and Sesshou building a relationship! This is really a touching chapter. ^_^ I enjoyed it very much. Made all of the waiting worth it.
L-desu (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Mar 2009
| yet another waffy chapter filled with hope.... argh! can't wait to see what happens next!
Sumi (Chapter 21) - Thu 05 Mar 2009
Now that was just too damn cute. ^-^
| I live for this story! I love it and pray to any god/cult leader that you update again soonish! (I add the '-ish' so I don't sound too much like a demanding reviewer. *^_^*)
shlane (Chapter 21) - Thu 05 Mar 2009
| ohhhhh, sooo cuute the ending. it wasn´t fluff filled, but it was implicit, jjaja snorlaxagome, too much pokemon for rin, but now it seems sesshoumaru although he accepts that he is going to pursue her is trying to keep a low profile about it and of course, his character is not of a regular man to boast against probable competition, he doesn´t need to, jajja, and they have rin all figured out, she only wants a new family to love and be loved in return, i think everyone is going to plot against kagome, jajaj, with the key player from the inside, little rin
This is getting fluffier by the minute.
I love it -squeeeeee-
Ahem... they are sooo cute like this. But why is Rin the only one realising what's going on here? Ah, yeah, I nearly forgot... she's a kid. lol.
Good job hon.
Dewa mata
| I was excited to see another chapter! Wonderful! I love this story so much. You do an amazing job. And Adele Geras, I've read two of her stories, Ithaka and Troy. They were really, really good!
So sweet, and such a welcome read before work! One great thing about working from home is a quick morning jaunt for updates. It's my morning paper, if you will, right beside that vital mug of coffee. *still becoming more coherent with each sip* Again with this chapter, nary a flaw: perfect prose and realistic, empathetic emotion. I love each meticulous word.
And I tell you want, if a man takes care of you when you're sick and disgusting, it's love. I know we already know they love each other, but damn, Kagome, you can't escape that kind of care. I can't wait for the moment they both realize what everyone else already knows. :)
BTW, I still haven't had the time to dive into the links you sent me. I know, I know! I have the time to read but not to write? Ah well! Your stuff is my percocet, what can I say?
Loved it, as always!
Ladydot (Chapter 21) - Thu 05 Mar 2009
This chapter was perfect! You had me in a fit of laughter at the whole doctor scene, I couldn't stop laughing to save my life. Wonderful story and especially love where you are taking it. Keep up the fantastic work and hope to see an update soon!
Beautiful... absolutely beautiful. Wonderful interaction with the characters... as much as I wish you would update more often, the chapters are definitely worth the wait.
cjflutterbye (Chapter 21) - Thu 05 Mar 2009
Oh - I just adore this story.
So damn cute - RinRin, and the poor smelly dog, and Sess' interaction with his doctor friend.
So freaking fun!!
Can't wait for more.
| It's nice to see Sess taking care of someone. And poor rin trying to recreate her family. When little kids lose parents they hang on to what they have tightly. Loved the chapter. Please keep up the great work.
| This was a nice chapter. Very sweet...I liked it very much. *hugs and smiles*
Possessed (Chapter 21) - Wed 04 Mar 2009
This chapter was absolutely delightful! I liked the imagery of a worried Rin curled up on Sess, and him reassuring her. A small cookie bribe seals the deal!
I love Kagome's Percocet/vodka induced behavior! You can feel his burn at her pushing all the buttons on the elevator.
(The description of her looking like an escaped mental patient had me rolling, btw!)
She just cracked me up as she discusses with the doctor her physical ailments and self-medication practices... LMAO!!! I like that he just takes it all in stride, and sees the interesting person beneath the illness... he wants to ask her out!
"Snorlaxagome..." very nice, and soooo attractive! This part was particularly sweet. I can see him sitting there, entertaining Rin with books, while they both keep an eye on Kagome.
At the end, it is so poignant they both know Rin is desperately is trying to pull the threads they are weaving into each other's lives into a family she can wrap herself up in. This is so very much something a child would try to will into being. You portrayed it very, very well... I can't wait to see what comes next.
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