What a great chapter... I love how you seamlessly move the characters through the growing relationships with each other. You really get the feeling they are getting used to/growing into being a real family. Kagome sneaking a peek into his desk... ACK! I cringe! Him catching her in the shower, and staying to watch... her foul mouth... priceless! Boy, do I love the way you write... it is a breath of fresh air! I patiently await the next chapter from you! ;)
Anamika (Chapter 19) - Thu 11 Dec 2008
| Seriouly when you mentioned about Sess coming back I was thinking along the same lines, I mean Kag's in the shower and etc. that you wrote. Nice chapter and Kagsy does have a wonderful dictionary?? LOl... Update soon.
Ashes (Chapter 19) - Thu 11 Dec 2008
I really liked the song Kagome was singing. Did you write that yourself?
Very nice chapter. I enjoyed it greatly as allways. I'm kinda sad about how you ended it, even if it is the logical conclusion of an encounter such as that. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Good luck with everything.
shlane (Chapter 19) - Thu 11 Dec 2008
| well, hi, i was so excited when i saw that you updated, well fist of all nice heart to heart between sesshoumaru and sango jajja, kagome's dating issue is finally clear and now sesshoumaru's got to work with that and not mess it up, "good things happen to those who wait", so cute the growing relationship between the taisho's and kagome, ken is finally taking off all his regrets about inuyasha's death, and now i'm seeing as if sesshoumaru's mind is IN THE PERPETUAL GUTTER with kagome, what's wrong with him, his 2 month celibacy is getting to him, how is kagome going to act about the not so guilty perusal by the now declared hentai that sesshoumaru now is?, keep it up with my entire support
InuPriestess (Chapter 19) - Wed 10 Dec 2008
I really loced this chapter.... You really rounded it out in the end.. I never laughed so hard in my life!!! expecially when sess had his "hand" caught in the "cookie jar" with that oh-so-expectant bulge... hehe ^.^ I can't wait to see what happens next!!!.. ~.^
| OH MY GOD this chapter was so good ugh and i wish that the kiss at the end actually happened but ahwell im sure something else interesting will happen soon [[i hope]] but please continue soon
| IDK why but this by far is THE most interesting story I've read on this website and I've been reading QUITE a long time. This last chapter you've written is hilarious. Th ending had me in stitches [such an old timer I know lol]. But seriously, I highly enjoy this. PLEASE continue the great work
~Gem~
Zyren (Chapter 19) - Wed 10 Dec 2008
| Thank you so much, that was definately a breath of fresh air. Its finals week, at this moment i should be studying for my history final that start in an hour but i just couldnt resist and im glad because reading this helped relieve some of the stress. thsi was a great chapter, funny with touching moments...and Kagome slipped!!!! man i thought he was gonna get it but i guess he hasnt even thought to connect her to Scarlet so he wouldnt have understood her comment.
gay, ex-priest heavily into bondage....that was hilarious and OMG when she noticed that he was standing in the bathroom her reaction had me laughing out loud and let me tell you it being finals week, and im sitting by myself in teh crowded cafe my unexpected bouts of laughter has surely made everyone around me believe that i have cracked under the pressure of school LOL!
thanks again for an awesome chap, i love this and look forward to the next installment!!
| Another great chapter! And don't worry, from you it's the longer chapter the better. I must say I am impressed. When we can say "That's exacly how we imagined she would react" then you have done a good job with your characters. This story is one of the best storys I have ever read... I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! (And the shower scene... Funny!)
Nobody (Chapter 19) - Wed 10 Dec 2008
AHHHH Why must it end there? Why? Thats it im going to bed. I can't wait! Great job i loved it!
l33t (Chapter 19) - Wed 10 Dec 2008
As usual, this chapter was fantastic. I loved how he watched her that whole time and how she freaked out. Priceless. I'm sure there is going to be awkwardness the next time they see each other.
| Yippee!!! New Chapter!!! YIPPEE!!!
My first thought was "nice welcome home, naked girl in his shower" but her catching him with a boner... HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
That could be a bit ... odd later I suppose.
Should be fun. I can hardly wait.
Love the story!
Sumi (Chapter 19) - Wed 10 Dec 2008
ha! sess just wouldnt stop lookin.
nice chapter, you did it once again! breath of fresh air from freakin finals. thank you
I wish I could print out a copy of each chapter, make little notes in the margins, and mail them to you. There's no way I can comment on every detail that catches my eye, elicits a grin or tugs at my heart. This story makes a stamp on my soul, word upon perfect word. Write a book, damn you, so I have something to scribble on and ink my immediate impressions in confetti colored permanence!
LC Rose (Chapter 19) - Tue 09 Dec 2008
| OH GOD! What a wonderful chapter. With so much happening and then the dinner with the parents (that was a sweet scene, hon) and then the whole shower thing. You tease, you. I hope Sesshoumaru didn't blow his chances..or set himself back too much. I mean, she was in HIS bathroom. Oh! And Kagome's reactions were hilarious. I laughed my ass off reading what she was yelling and could see her doing exactly that. Your characters are perfected and I eagerly await more.
Chaos_Queen77 (Chapter 19) - Tue 09 Dec 2008
No worries ridiculusly long chapters make us happy! Hahaha she screamed at him for being a peeping tom even if it was his house and room. HEHEHEHEHE!!! I think though that her reaction was a little extreme though... oh well, perhaps maybe he should get off his high horse and tell her he likes her. *Sigh* Men.
Any who loved the new chapter cant wait til the next one!
Chaos_Queen77 (Chapter 19) - Tue 09 Dec 2008
No worries ridiculusly long chapters make us happy! Hahaha she screamed at him for being a peeping tom even if it was his house and room. HEHEHEHEHE!!! I think though that her reaction was a little extreme though... oh well, perhaps maybe he should get off his high horse and tell her he likes her. *Sigh* Men.
Any who loved the new chapter cant wait til the next one!
mhs02 (Chapter 18) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
| Hey....your story is fun to read....I just got to know when is Kag and Sess are going to make out....or something.....please keep it flowing....
shlane (Chapter 18) - Wed 03 Dec 2008
| I'm already dying for the next installment, i loved all the chapters so far, i want to know what's going to happen the suspense is killing me, how the relationship is going to develope with sango's meddling, keep it up and no rush, but hurry, jajajaj
shlane (Chapter 18) - Wed 03 Dec 2008
| I'm already dying for the next installment, i loved all the chapters so far, i want to know what's going to happen the suspense is killing me, how the relationship is going to develope with sango's meddling, keep it up and no rush, but hurry, jajajaj
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