I have taken to rereading this story because it is just so so wonderful and intense. However--it is Tuesday and although I have allowed you a week off--I have to say I will not allow for more!! hehe just kidding--but seriously, worse Tuesday ever. ^^;;;; I really hope for more soon or I will go crazy! Ah, and I feel compelled to let you know I only say this as a horrible shrewd compliment ;) No rush but you have got me hooked!

yesss! so sad you are taking a week off! can't wait for the next installment! 

You are very, very good at portraying emotions.  They're solid too, and not just some passing, 'he was sad, then happy' kind of thing.  You've fleshed out your characters so well!  It really makes reading this a treat.  And this chapter... =D PROGRESS!!!! cue happy dance.

~Z

It's going to be a common theme for your reviews of this latest chapter...but allow me to ditto the sentiments that this chapter was utterly heart-wrenching. You pushed us along the fine edge of patience nearly the whole way through - I mean, we all understand Kagome's had a hard time of it, but her disbelief and stubborness were so infuriating. You cleverly put all your readers' words in Sesshomaru's mouth with his line: "You will desist in your nonsense..." Awesomeness.

Well I was glad to see this today!  Thank you for the happy surprise on a stressful day. :) 

Absolutely love this story!!  So much trial and turbulence - I love the relationships you've crafted and the story itself, is marvelous.

Thanks for writing!!

O.O......just O.O

These past few chapters have just been a rollercoaster ride of emotions. They were so beautifully portrayed and displayed and just so real, that they just leapt off the screen. And just like that time in Hell when they were in new jewel,I felt like I couldn't breathe , couldn't blink because I was afraid I would miss something. And gahhh, that kiss had me squealing in girlish delight.

This has truly become an epic fanfiction. Not because of the word count, but because every word makes me feel. Feel to the point where sometimes I feel so drained after reading an update, but in the best way. This has truly become such a beautiful, phenominal piece of work that just leaves me in awe of it and your talent as a writer. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Love always

wow what a great chapter very emotional. Nice to see Sesshomaru can have a moment of weekness at leat around Kagome. Lets her see he's efected as well. I hope the wedding day will be a happy one and without disaster unless its funney to break the tention. I love this story. I follow this story on the other site as well. thanks for wrighting.

Keep it coming.

Wow. I have to say, that at least to me, this was the most intense chapter for Sesshoumaru and Kagome, especially as some sort of resolution. It makes me feel happy in a strange way to see when Sesshoumaru is vunerable. I guess it's a nice break from being the alpha all the time and that he can lean on Kagome. I really hope they can grow from this point. The marriage will definitely be interesting! I can't wait for more. This story is absolutely amazing.

God how I love your writing!! I'm on vacation in England and brought my tablet so I wouldn't miss any of your updates! As for the length of the chapter, I never want them to end so the longer the better! I love the emotion of each chapter and how you keep me on the edge of my seat! Thank you so much for writing such great stories!!!

"The pressure grew until she could only feel the unbearable, breathless agony of her body caving in, her soul and mind and heart crying out their suffering as they shattered into dust."

Everything that is Kagome is now DUST? *sobs*

can't wait for your update!!!!

I only meant to read a chapter or three.  Instead, I will admit you hooked me.  I'm not sure if it was the different approach to a Sess/Kag fic, the realism, or the fact that I ended up needing to look words up in the dictionary after reading them XD.  Whatever it was I got hooked.  I like your writing style, and I ended up reading all of this in one go XD.  As a result my brain resembles an pile of goooo.  I am surviving on coffee and cookies alone >> so uh... no big in depth review about grammar(excellent), word choice(I love looking up new words), plot twisties (had me guessing, so very good), and character devolvement(very realistic and non-rushed).

That is your short review. The only thing left from me is...yayyyy another chapter update to look forward to besides Lord Charming.

toodles.

~Zero

hmm i just posted this and i'm not sure it worked >< going to do it again.  if you have double my apologies

Not exactly what I was expecting but it makes sense. Now we just have to see how long it takes everybody to admit their feelings. Hopefully not the decades Kagome is talking about. Maybe Sesshoumaru willXcodetot his senses because he almost lost Kagome in this. Well whatever is going to happen next (and it doesn't look like a hot and steamy wedding night) I can't wait to see what happens next :)

"Please sir(ma'am), I want some more". =D  Wonderful job; can't wait until Tueday!

Wow, this is written so perfectly!

Keep it coming.

And...  They're back to the old routine... Avoid, avoid, avoid... running from each other... waiting to see if some miracle will solve their problems. Kagome is too thickheaded. Even when a GOD tells her to make the first step and open her heart to Sesshoumaru, she disagrees and hesitates and stalls. And Sesshoumaru is no better. ARGH. Ok, I give up. I'm starting to think they're better appart!!!

*breathe in... breathe out*

Ok, rant done.

Now, you evil writer, you got some explanations to do! How can you let us hanging on that cliff? You cruel cruel person!!!

Please send the next chapter!!

Holy popsicles! You've got me hanging on your every word! I'm so emotionally invested in this story, it's absurd. I can't wait for the next update! You're brilliant and I really admire your mad skills.

Oh, no, no, no!  We don't hate Hatter!!  I have waiting days for you to update, and you didn't disappoint!!  I do believe this was/is my favorite chapter.  Thank you!  And, I can't wait for the next one!  :D