I'm really happy with this chapter. I'm glad you decided to do what few fanfic authors do - the dirty work. You actually took a chance when you had Sesshoumaru copulate with Kagome, especially a Kagome-sans-Kagome. A lot of authors are nervous about that, and I appreciate your willingness (as always) to write about the less happy times of our lives and about the unpleasant situations these characters really should be experiencing in some stories, but often don't. As much as I would love to see an immediate happy ending (humanity's passion for instant gratification and all that), I know I'll be ten times more thrilled with how you write and eventually finish the story as you want to.
Wonderful writing as per usual! Really quite fantastic.
WOW! What an epic chapter! I'm without words!
Loved Touga and Inuyasha's piece! So awesome! And I really loved Izanami's bittersweet ending, I feel like she was finally redeemed (only between us, I always thought Izanagi a big jerk!!!)
Thanks for the answers to my early questions... Now I have a few more! I wanna know about Sessmama and Shinzuru history... And what about the bit about a blessing? Hmmm...
So... the ending let out there's no pup yet... But pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease, tell me Kag and Sess will stop tap dancing around the issue! I mean, with no pup and mating mark gone, please don't tell me the two clueless beings will decide to do the "honorable" thing and let the other go free! ARGH! I'll go there to beat some sense in them, if it's the case!! I really will! Seriously, I have a stick prepared!
Anyway, I'm desperated. Please send the next chapter!!!
captain lolo (Chapter 39) - Tue 03 Jul 2012
i have a feeling you are going to get alot of hate mail for that chapter :P
tie the loose engs up well dear!!! Love your story thanks!
OMG! This is the best chapter...ever! Yeah, it was hard to read...I know you stated it was hard to write, but man oh man, I really liked it! That really caught my interest. Hope you update soon! ^.^
Little Rin (Chapter 39) - Tue 03 Jul 2012
Cliffie....... (pouts and tugs shirt) more? More? Please?
Wow...just..wow. Unexpected and amazing. Kagome's bravery...Sesshoumaru crying...his emotions...wonderful. Thanks for the midweek treat!!
Keep it coming.
Well....that was certainly NOT what I was expecting. Huh. Wow. .....I have to go process everything i just read....and I'll prolly re-read the chapter cuz I KNOW i missed something..-_-
Anywho, can't wait for the next piece.
TOOLAZYTOSIGNIN (Chapter 39) - Tue 03 Jul 2012
OMMG PERF <3
Sorry all caps
How do I express this feeling? Oh, yeah, like this. D:
My mouth was HANGING open. Here's the thing, your ideas are lovely, but combined with how you initiate them just makes it down right delicious. This seemingly simple idea of recovery has swirled into this plethora of a story. The characters are strongly built; each resonates in my mind separately.
That scene is a delicate situation to write. They should call you the surgeon theory. I'm furthermore becoming more and more accustom to your work. I'm like a fanfic snob now. If the characters doncertain accordingly as you have them here, it seems too much for me.
Bravo, hatter.
Oh me oh my!! If it Friday yet?!?!?!?! D'X
Hey, I liked it! I really liked it actually. I like how you included InuYasha. And hopefully sometime soon, Kagome and Sesshoumaru can have a nice "ahah just kidding, re-do!" of what happened back there in hell.
Loveyaa (Chapter 38) - Sat 30 Jun 2012
They seem to have really have gotten themselves into trouble on this one. Wonder how they are all gonna get out of this one in one piece. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Great chapter, as always! It's nice to see some (albeit very small, tiny, minuscule!!! hehehe) progress in their romance!!!
But I didn't get some things...
If Izanami wanted Kagome, then why put her to test? And why she was displeased when Sess intefered in said test? Why put all this effort in forcing Kagome to the position of the Lady of the Moon, if the intention was take her body? How a pup would've saved Kagome? AAAHHH, so many questions! I need more chapters!!!
Anyway, awesome work! I love your fic!
=]
Memori (Chapter 38) - Sat 30 Jun 2012
OH MAN! I can't wait for the next chapter! Izanami is one hateful goddess lol. And Sesshoumaru! Wow; it's like he's one a game show and the announcer asks..."You've just made your mate feel like $h!T! How does that make you feel?" He's so clueless sometimes, one of the guys just needs to walk up to him, hit him upside the head(like Gibbs in NCIS) and tell "Hey it's alright to love her" lol. But sadly that will never happen...can't wait for the next few chapters with super-awesome fighting and gooey mushy lovey (maybe)!
Well.....this went to hell in a hand basket quite quickly didn't it? I loving it by the way. ^_^ Though the disfunctionality is killing me....-____-
Can't wait for more! :)
OMG!! This chapter was thrilling!! Sooooo good!! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love a feisty Kagome especially when she's telling off a goddess! Sesshoumaru is seriously realizing how much she really means to him! Awesome chapter!
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