Ooooh...the story us finally getting interesting! Been waiting to find out how Sesshomaru will execute hus plans. It's a good thing that she was having a nightmare and didn't really sleep with the doctor. Can't wait for the next chapter! Excellent job!
Now this was SWEEEEET!!! I'm so glad he gave in to her want of him and that she did in that moment of seeing him realize it was Sesshoumaru that see missed and desired, just as I thought. Oh and I'm more than happy that Sesshoumaru didn't question her further about smelling her arousal upon coming in the room but she awoke in pure fear.
So, the Emperor has come just a bit sooner than expected, huh? As you said, that's will have to due and Sessh will have to execute his plans immediately.
Now you've got me on the edge of my seat!!! I can not wait until you post more. Thanks, Moonlight, really. Having Kagome doing the nasty with anyone other than Sesshoumaru just didn't work for me. Not with the way you wrote this from the start anyway. They've been through too dang much to just throw it all away and have Sesshoumaru go on a killing spree thus changing him back to who he used to be only worse.
Well, better let you go for now. PM me if you need a spring board, but I think you're doing just fine! JEN
Shaneka (Chapter 107) - Sun 06 Jul 2014
Once again another excellent chapter, keep up the great work. Update soon.
Shaneka (Chapter 107) - Sun 06 Jul 2014
Once again another excellent chapter, keep up the great work. Update soon.
Shaneka (Chapter 107) - Sun 06 Jul 2014
Once again another excellent chapter, keep up the great work. Update soon.
Monica (Chapter 107) - Sun 06 Jul 2014
Holy s@$#!!!!! I was literally on the edge of my seat...well done!
Whew! Just a horrific nightmare. Looking forward to seeing more.
Oh crap, Kagome is in for it now huh? Please update soon. I can't wait to wear what happens next. Will Sesshoumaru kill Kagome for being unfaithful, or what. I can't wait.
Miss C (Chapter 106) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
"His sweet, innocent and beautiful Kagome was betraying him with another." LOL Ha ha ha ha! Oh how the tables have turned. Sorry Sess, Not!! I am glad this happened. Great twist as always.
Shaneka (Chapter 106) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
Oh MY God, this chapter was sooooo awesome. I am so excited and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, please update soon.
DivaG (Chapter 106) - Tue 01 Jul 2014
My God! If it's not just a nightmare, I can say with all certainty that Kagome is the only being in this whole world that was born with the worst luck ever, for the one time that she decides to give in temptation with the doctor is the time Sesshoumaru catches her in the act. Now not only she will have to deal with it's consequences, but also with the fact that the doctor's death ocurred because she let the situation escalate to a point of no return. After all, she knew that Sesshoumaru would react very badly. She should have talked to him before taking a decision, just the way he talked to her before marrying the princess, so that they could come to an agreement. What a mess, I so hope that is really just a nightmare.
Tana_san (Chapter 106) - Mon 30 Jun 2014
Ohhhh...Moonlight!!!!! This had better be a nightmare!!!!! This just can NOT happen!!! Kagome is NOT that kid of person. She left Sesshoumaru because she couldn't bare to share her mate with another woman and promised to wait for him as their love was worth waiting for. She would never betray her mate and their love.
I can fully understand Kagome maybe developing feelings toward the doctor as he is the only other male that has been a constant in her life since leaving Sesshoumaru and that doctor has been very caring, helpful and devoting to her and her babies. She misses the love she lost, the intimacy in a loving relationship but Kagome is not the type of person who "has needs that must be fulfilled".
You knew that when you wrote this chapter that you'd have me defending every aspect of Kagome's faithfulness now didn't you?!? And what did you do???... You walked right back to that television to make me wait while you enjoy watching soccer!!!! and you know the waiting will be killing me with curiousity too!!! Dang, you're GOOD!!!
I've got to wonder how many other fans are going to be writing more "lengthy" reviews? Oh and if you have made this a reality, and Sesshoumaru has killed the doctor and who knows what will happen to Kagome, I can say for sure that she has taken all their hard efforts, trials and tribulations and thrown them away for a romp in bed as Sesshoumaru will start a war out of betrayal, anger, and bitterness. All his efforts to save his race will be for nothing when he gets lost within himself and his true nature comes out for revenge.
Can't wait to see what you'll come up with next. No worries, I'm still one of your greatest fans. Not everything can go the way we, the readers, want them to. It's still Sess/Kag and there are no rules for a "happy ending". You can always have Kagome wake up in the shower realizing this was all a dream like on the tv show "Dallas" many years ago.... JEN
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